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0 You did a great job of writing. Mofos You did a great job of writing. HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. The only ‘bad’ thing about your story that I hated to see, was that it had to end. I was enjoying the story so much it made me sad to reach that point. Listen to the comment made by Gymgirl. 16 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-02 16:45:54thumbs up.realy enjoyed d storyanonymous readerReport 2013-07-22 18:29:21I like having golf bats xD. There is nothing better. You did a wonderful job of handling the dialogue, which is something that a lot of writers have problems with. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did. It is a fantastic story. There is nothing better. I have read other stories here, written by people that was supposed to know the English language, and some of them were worse and harder to read than yours. Your punctuation was almost perfect, a lot better than some other stories that I have read on this website. I had more problems reading some of the comments that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story! I have read other stories here, written by people that was supposed to know the English language, and some of them were worse and harder to read than yours. HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. You included enough detail to make the story interesting
