Tempting Tight Hole Stretched

bruhanonymous readerReport 2010-08-24 09:00:24you have a good idea for a story, but there’s a lot of work to be done. if not rewrite.READERReport 2009-07-16 18:28:20WOW, ANOTHER REALLY BAD ONE, WHERE DO YOU LOSERS COME FROM????kickass000Report 2009-05-29 10:24:20I must agree with the other comments on here, you need to brake down the story into sections,
then work over each one until it makes sense, then follow the flow of the story from one section into the next , and never post until you you reread itRomancerReport 2008-11-27 01:44:15Please let you fine writing skills in the future b/c you positively don’t have any now.«123» if not rewrite.READERReport 2009-07-16 18:28:20WOW, ANOTHER REALLY BAD ONE, WHERE DO YOU LOSERS COME FROM????kickass000Report 2009-05-29 10:24:20I must agree with the other comments on here, you need to brake down the story into sections,
then work over each one until it makes sense, then follow the flow of the story from one section into the next , and never post until you you reread itRomancerReport 2008-11-27 01:44:15Please let you fine writing skills in the future b/c you positively don’t have any now.«123» 15 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2010-08-30 21:45:10FUCK YOUR WRITING SKILLZ YOU SORRY EXCUSE FOR AN AUTHER THE NEXT TIME U TRY TO WRITE SUMTHIN LET IT MAKE SCENCE YOU ASS HOLE WRITER BITCHASS HO! Txxx bruhanonymous readerReport 2010-08-24 09:00:24you have a good idea for a story, but there’s a lot of work to be done. 15 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2010-08-30 21:45:10FUCK YOUR WRITING SKILLZ YOU SORRY EXCUSE FOR AN AUTHER THE NEXT TIME U TRY TO WRITE SUMTHIN LET IT MAKE SCENCE YOU ASS HOLE WRITER BITCHASS HO!