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whoopsies… Sislovesme 5 comments«1»ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 17:02:17yeah i do tend to write like this anyway i like to have different perspectives on how a character reacts or behaves its a little weird i know. …anonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 10:37:49I liked it. whoopsies… But as a nit picky point, you jumped between 1st and 3rd person a lot. But as a nit picky point, you jumped between 1st and 3rd person a lot. whoopsies… But as a nit picky point, you jumped between 1st and 3rd person a lot. and was wondering what you think?«1» and was wondering what you think?«1» Cut back on the descriptives a bit.ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 00:30:05heyy everybody, i just sat down to write the next installment, after not being able to sleep all night! and was wondering what you think?«1» There’s literary times to do this but rarely in the same chapter or especially paragraph to paragraph.ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 08:21:34Haha i do get into the story abit… Cut back on the descriptives a bit.ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 00:30:05heyy everybody, i just sat down to write the next installment, after not being able to sleep all night! Cut back on the descriptives a bit.ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 00:30:05heyy everybody, i just sat down to write the next installment, after not being able to sleep all night! 5 comments«1»ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 17:02:17yeah i do tend to write like this anyway i like to have different perspectives on how a character reacts or behaves its a little weird i know. …anonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 10:37:49I liked it. But as a nit picky point, you jumped between 1st and 3rd person a lot. 5 comments«1»ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 17:02:17yeah i do tend to write like this anyway i like to