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0 the story it self was ok but it was a little rough and it didn’t really have a flow at all.«12» 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-12 06:16:48To the person who commented on my previous comment. babes full videos 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-12 06:16:48To the person who commented on my previous comment. You probably don’t submit stories but if you’re gonna knock someone for spelling and grammar at least have your own shit in order!!! My advice is to rewrite this and proof read it to make sure it works well before posting it. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-12 06:16:48To the person who commented on my previous comment. Really, you’re complaining about the spelling and grammar of a comment that you obviously had no trouble reading. To Thel20, you should proofread your comments, your writing and grammar was every bit as bad as the authors. First of the story felt rushed. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-12 06:16:48To the person who commented on my previous comment. My advice is to rewrite this and proof read it to make sure it works well before posting it. Cya Later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2013-05-11 18:47:24Writing was quite rushed and the grammar quite terrible. First of the story felt rushed. Yes you’re right i don’t submit stories. I’m not going to tell you to stop writing like some people will. I never said anything about the spelling or grammar of the story. Yes you’re right i don’t submit stories. Cya Later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2013-05-11 18:47:24Writing was quite rushed and the grammar quite terrible. There was no build-up and no flow. You really have to work on your writing. Cya Later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2013-05-10 10:58:11I’m not going