Hot brunette German teen gets wild in a car during public hookup

AS IS THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT AND WAY TO RUSHED AND NEEDS TO BE DELETED.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-15 21:15:41not good this reads like it should be chapter two not one. WHERE ARE THEY? Free porn Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I look foward to see this progress.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-19 06:01:46A great story but needs to be longer. A longer build up would help, i.e. personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? who are they and why should we care about them or want them together? DO THEY KEEP FUCKING OR WAS IT A ONE TIME THING? YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2. YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. Thanks for taking the time to write it.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 15:15:40a very good start but keep this story going.«123» It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more. this is a first draft only and need major work before it is posted. DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? who are they and why should we care about them or want them together? WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. WHERE ARE THE PARENTS? Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I look foward to see this progress.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-19