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0 Don’t take the lazy way out and just make excuses all the time. family strokes videos 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 02:31:00really is deleting your account any better than being a coward?anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 21:31:08My advice would be to not just blow off everything that I’m saying, either. The grammar issues especially will just turn off so many readers that they won’t care how good the story is. Don’t take the lazy way out and just make excuses all the time. (Part 1/2)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 19:38:00pplz my friend wants ppl to ask stuff or talk to her on ask.fm/akaErin ,,anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 10:32:55Great stuff keep it up have him fuck her ass
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SMS«123» Ultimately, though, it’s up to you whether you want to actually listen or not. Not only that, but the dialogue felt pretty forced at times as well. Also, begging for postive ratings won’t help. If you really can’t do that yourself, then try to find an editor who can help do it for you. The grammar issues especially will just turn off so many readers that they won’t care how good the story is. But if you keep going about your writing as you currently are, then you’ll never reach that potential. There’s plenty out there. Even though your plot is pretty good, your horrendous grammar and spelling just make the story unbearably difficult to read. Give them the attention they deserve and try to make them the best they can be. Learn from some of the authors on this site.
