BP182-p. Naughty Little Brat

Formatting was also terrible. Thanks.«1» Second, please don’t leave us wondering what the two girls in the bathroom were up to. babes full videos Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story! Second, please don’t leave us wondering what the two girls in the bathroom were up to. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 13:05:29Well. … Remember that it is always easier for people to criticize and insult than to actually work and (god forbid) think. As I said before – good, creative story. As I said before – good, creative story. This needs a lot of work before it is readable.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 01:05:57Hmmm… I have two suggestions. Please follow up with another story. As I said before – good, creative story. Formatting was also terrible. Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part. Formatting was also terrible. This needs a lot of work before it is readable.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 01:05:57Hmmm… You left some great possibilities open for a second chapter. Thanks.«1» Second, please don’t leave us wondering what the two girls in the bathroom were up to. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 13:05:29Well. … Second, please don’t leave us wondering what the two girls in the bathroom were up to. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors