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Otherwise just use the period and say, “She was excited,” or show it with a description of your actions. You have made the same mistake so many of us make when we begin to write. China AV The racial stuff might be better handled without the tags like mulatto. One last thought. You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst. Limit the use of adverbs as well. Limit the use of adverbs as well. You have a vivid imagination and a fine grasp of the English language. You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst. Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you. Expand your skills and keep writing.DragonheartReport 2008-10-01 18:31:44″The cloudless sun beat down unmerciful on the somber gathered contingency”
“fresh dug plot”
“No no, he had no intention..”
“plowed her slit with gusto”
“strawberry tipped tits? You have made the same mistake so many of us make when we begin to write. One last thought. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-08 22:27:01the negro talk was stupid, the few that i know SPEAK english BETTER than you write4bearReport 2008-10-22 17:34:13Pretentiious Difficult to follow. Limit the use of adverbs as well. One last thought. You have a vivid imagination and a fine grasp of the English language. Otherwise just use the period and say, “She was excited,” or show it with a description of your actions. You will impress more people with your story telling abilities if you dump the turgid prose of yesteryear and work with colloquila English, American flavored.