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DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? Teamskeet full videos YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-18 20:18:34THE BEST THING YOU CAN DO IS DELETE IT AND START OVER FROM THE BEGINNING. DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? WHAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP DID THEY HAVE BEFORE THIS? personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more. DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? where is the background and character development? 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-18 20:18:34THE BEST THING YOU CAN DO IS DELETE IT AND START OVER FROM THE BEGINNING. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said. YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. WHO ARE THEY? personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. Thanks for taking the time to write it.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 15:15:40a very good start but keep this story going.«123» where is the background and character development?